Around 0:05; the text is just bland or ordinary, unoriginal basically... I see this text type in everything & everywhere...
Around 0:16; the background looks like a marble of some sort, not actual ice...
At the end of sequence where it says 'DON'T MISS IT; JANUARY 9, 2010', The text is a bit pixelated & blurry...
Also, this is my opinion, I think at 0:05 color and background should be the same as 0:09 then the backgrounds should be uniform and then transition into 0:17;
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On the same page as FOX news
Love It.
Impressive!
right in line!
I like the other one better, don't care much for all the noise. Guess I'm just old. LOL
Some constructive criticism Joe:
Around 0:05; the text is just bland or ordinary, unoriginal basically... I see this text type in everything & everywhere...
Around 0:16; the background looks like a marble of some sort, not actual ice...
At the end of sequence where it says 'DON'T MISS IT; JANUARY 9, 2010', The text is a bit pixelated & blurry...
Also, this is my opinion, I think at 0:05 color and background should be the same as 0:09 then the backgrounds should be uniform and then transition into 0:17;
I like it, but it could be a little shorter
Enjoyed it. You got a good head on your shoulders and a great mind in it. map
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