Around 0:05; the text is just bland or ordinary, unoriginal basically... I see this text type in everything & everywhere...
Around 0:16; the background looks like a marble of some sort, not actual ice...
At the end of sequence where it says 'DON'T MISS IT; JANUARY 9, 2010', The text is a bit pixelated & blurry...
Also, this is my opinion, I think at 0:05 color and background should be the same as 0:09 then the backgrounds should be uniform and then transition into 0:17;
On the same page as FOX news
ReplyDeleteLove It.
ReplyDeleteImpressive!
ReplyDeleteright in line!
ReplyDeleteI like the other one better, don't care much for all the noise. Guess I'm just old. LOL
ReplyDeleteSome constructive criticism Joe:
ReplyDeleteAround 0:05; the text is just bland or ordinary, unoriginal basically... I see this text type in everything & everywhere...
Around 0:16; the background looks like a marble of some sort, not actual ice...
At the end of sequence where it says 'DON'T MISS IT; JANUARY 9, 2010', The text is a bit pixelated & blurry...
Also, this is my opinion, I think at 0:05 color and background should be the same as 0:09 then the backgrounds should be uniform and then transition into 0:17;
I like it, but it could be a little shorter
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it. You got a good head on your shoulders and a great mind in it. map
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